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Alethea
22-04-2004, 22:51
...they did it again. Camus and Filimon are both having naughty poetry streak.

How about to write a haiku?

I'm sure, you know the rule, guys : 5-7-5.

There is one written by Wendy Cope:

The cherry blossom
in my neighbors garden--Oh!
IT looks really nice.

camus
22-04-2004, 23:00
Originally posted by Alethea
...they did it again. Camus and Filimon are both having naughty poetry streak.

How about to write a haiku?

I'm sure, you know the rule, guys : 5-7-5.

There is one written by Wendy Cope:

The cherry blossom
in my neighbors garden--Oh!
IT looks really nice.

Bah. Filimon is just trying to be nasty as far as I can tell. Now he (with his broken English) is correcting mine.

Amusing haiku by the way.

Peter

Alethea
22-04-2004, 23:07
Originally posted by camus
Amusing haiku by the way.



I will post a few more if you take part in a competition:)

camus
22-04-2004, 23:10
Originally posted by Alethea
I will post a few more if you take part in a competition:)

I do hope you're being facetious; this time, I'm just going to watch :)

Alethea
22-04-2004, 23:15
C'mon, it's not a challenge!! Here you are:



Friday evening:
The moon is up, expats settle,
Tinkoff is open.

Alethea
22-04-2004, 23:18
One more:

Friday evening,
Boar House is open,
Girls are working hard...

Hell, this one is perfect.

camus
22-04-2004, 23:21
Originally posted by Alethea
C'mon, it's not a challenge!! Here you are:



Friday evening:
The moon is up, expats settle,
Tinkoff is open.

haiku is for wimps
belligerence? eat it up.
burn in hell, assholes

I hope you like it :)

Alethea
22-04-2004, 23:26
Quite:D

camus
22-04-2004, 23:31
Originally posted by Alethea
Quite:D

I considered ebonics, but I'm not sure this makes sense:

you stupid fly, dawg
fo' shizzle muh nizzle, true dat yo ?
mom didn't raise no foo'

I'm familiar with the expression "stupid fly" but don't know whether it's complimentary or not.

Alethea
22-04-2004, 23:34
Your poetic skills are getting from good to better!!
There is no need to quote my posts, Peter.
Here we are, talking privately;)

camus
22-04-2004, 23:37
Originally posted by Alethea
Your poetic skills are getting from good to better!!
There is no need to quote my posts, Peter.
Here we are, talking privately;)

No way. Filimon is lurking somewhere.

PS. Take a stab at Onegin. I DARE you :)

Alethea
22-04-2004, 23:41
No way.
He is somewhere in London heading to pub .

camus
22-04-2004, 23:43
You know this sumvbitch ? Is he as nasty and petty in person as he is online ?

Alethea
22-04-2004, 23:57
Peter, Peter....you are traumatized by the fact his translation was as good as yours.

camus
22-04-2004, 23:59
Originally posted by Alethea
Peter, Peter....you are traumatized by the fact his translation was as good as yours.

No it isn't but that's beside the point :) I'm traumatized (well annoyed really) at his shark-like behavior -- if it moves, bite it.

Anyway, you know the sumvbitch or not ?

Alethea
23-04-2004, 09:12
So where we were?

polly
23-04-2004, 09:16
uhh... in hell?

Alethea
23-04-2004, 09:27
yuk! can you make a haiku out of it? :)

polly
23-04-2004, 09:32
booger booger snot
sticky icky stringy goo
snot booger booger


there you go. haiku fresh out the nose.

Alethea
23-04-2004, 09:33
here comes camus with his comments...

sfjohns67
23-04-2004, 09:35
Cool - bodily function haiku!

I strain and grunt long
Streaks of pain paint my raw bum
Ah relief at last

polly
23-04-2004, 09:42
ha ha ha ha ha
he he he ha ha he he
ho ho ha ha ha

(reaction in haiku to sfjohn's previous haiku)

Alethea
23-04-2004, 09:44
Oh heady parmesan,
your smelly chunks beckon
I drool all over you..

polly
23-04-2004, 09:45
i ate indian
food for dinner and now my
poop will smell spicy